【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" u/ t- W) H" L- {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 d) D( A9 \' Y! pFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) G" ~; k2 {8 C5 {1 vWe meet and talk everyday,
# _$ Q8 {( J6 }3 l5 g  Y+ kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ G# v( X, V3 _; Q$ wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ U* L: ~" e- A  c- H! F9 h, @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 \3 p" o" w0 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" R% G( s# |/ j  I8 a$ aIf today isn’t too late,
2 o& F, w9 M0 I% V: II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( c% T8 M! P9 C# X6 eLove… just the word love
' l! _0 A8 ]6 n# D1 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 c1 y  c: d, J' Z! SI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 ?, R* s4 y1 ~0 P/ qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" _/ V% O; w2 S6 K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' n  D  i7 B. X( x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, R  e( n0 o  N  t7 s6 ~1 X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 p% |! T. V" h3 Y  ?1 O0 P6 ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: B" k0 f* K0 `: D* P" P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 E# P1 d  ^8 H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% c3 Y0 H+ Z/ b$ ^' l9 ~<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 @2 Y# @6 L9 }0 c6 W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% d5 M- ^+ t! X; U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 g7 s  W: _$ p5 L1 d<P>但我不会</P>
% J( Y" i0 u# Q1 M* d# s9 O9 |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" i% Q* V: ?6 R: x2 e  ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 m+ o3 y0 x, s% ^2 _/ W# A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. `6 S( R6 y4 p" l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 t. V- ^% y* O- m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! C6 f  P! h; p9 t. B% L! |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& u& ^8 l  V0 n0 P) Z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ a$ ^5 a3 L: W2 o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 r+ ~0 i" B8 I) u' B$ z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; l- C0 j/ v$ \, h9 @. A9 \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* y' o' L1 t( J, r, d  H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 }3 [3 o* d) f1 H, j& U% {0 |9 s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% f# z9 a8 @( A; O3 Y3 m: v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 u+ b: A9 Q8 _( R1 |; R, }& m; n, P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' u; g/ ^+ `: k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 k8 o+ l* f0 K+ @6 E, s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* \3 D7 f1 U; O- Y8 L! N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  m9 y( Q' o. P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 R/ h4 L# L% a0 K6 F: w% N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# W/ Y9 E1 @: N  K- v9 }( Z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>