【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) w. s' ^  u5 h( U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& G1 o, Y8 |# V6 C- C: X. cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# W5 S  }/ Q( cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, k* m8 p* S1 o' w  u. ]) g& _The sky is happy down to its soul
: @; w! W+ V2 L5 k. c+ C7 jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  I0 ~$ c6 _2 }9 d: IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 @2 Z; H/ C5 n: g( g* ]1 ]* R/ VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: b* a0 m& K& O$ M6 A* sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 r0 D# @: f/ Q# a& AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 r3 j/ A5 {3 i. aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! W2 {) x) Q* a( P4 o" B& H' JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# {5 V' t+ E. `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 M- C9 w) u9 X9 Y5 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: B; Y- V3 E3 F8 ?, Y( m: [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ?* i. ?8 t/ x1 E. u; G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& t* q4 Q' t5 |' Z; R8 q9 O! ?2 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ [: ?# S) Z. c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) l0 N3 q" `7 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 W% c; |1 N! `! k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 u; z6 W) b: [- A8 l# E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( p- o. _  M  u3 `5 w( G- ~# B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! A( V( C3 W6 d* B( D<P>你无需担心</P>
  |' ~9 t, H/ t4 a: Y- n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) V/ n4 N4 y* L6 O& K, y: C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. a4 i! l& g. ~. h4 s8 P6 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" j- z9 w7 u' k# J! u* S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 g9 a8 f2 I( A& I; \+ @& l) r* E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 I9 O4 n+ P: E) [# r6 D2 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- y2 u6 [4 u9 H' t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 u0 S' _' v2 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ~" c9 E& p2 R) j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 s7 q: W  T& Z8 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ h/ B3 k( d. ~& k  L) G: y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 C' e" K# H( W8 ^( N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) L" ^0 Z( W# N( S( ?5 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 _  J. T3 t  \  m  @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 i  {0 l! N2 h/ D% T. y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 u! o9 k0 _& G* z7 S* }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' Y0 Q+ e6 Q7 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* b, ^$ S. v) v# W' E1 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! j; I" j+ F8 d4 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: x: h1 B0 J1 N- {, G! @) y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# V2 w; S) e: r1 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>