【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
5 H" J6 M" e  @" n" J袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

) l0 d4 o! o" B* c8 H  O2 @+ {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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$ A+ @9 X& F+ `. B( X2 W3 G我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
& j0 x+ ~$ @1 k& \2 J! y" f我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
$ r1 P# o5 p, }* sI already loved you with all my heart
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+ X9 Y. N2 F4 v& U: K9 J* l在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
0 }$ z9 Y  y& z* d6 P6 ~( Y我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
1 w* R1 }2 v1 c+ D, z# ]# h* _: ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

" v: _/ \* a0 l% g+ n縱然朝夕相處
0 M. |: u- k/ s+ P; ^還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ z: {* @' N+ U+ s- p4 I) |& \" Q凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
. X; o0 @: s8 {* q6 {% I你的心情
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Love… just the word love
$ L$ s0 K2 V1 P' U9 `+ m9 @* rWhy is it so difficult to express?
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& Y7 H. V7 Y9 ]) s: `愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
  w/ }4 D' K$ G; ]9 y5 ^如此難以表白?

4 x. ?8 _1 W- S7 u9 CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

/ K% n/ Z( P2 D3 x# k愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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; u. q/ F8 y* I% TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
4 M2 q+ v, o% s+ c你將從我指間滑漏

  M8 B4 a7 e8 _" A3 U* ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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( `. ^+ f% F0 d7 p  z希望今天還不會太晚
5 f9 f9 W7 p2 x) Q7 H讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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' a9 H1 F! v  w6 c6 n5 K: ?! a- ]1 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
* B" H3 E7 v3 w7 U) P" f2 s. H收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
; _4 \7 U. o. E* w' y# |! Q' W. jWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
$ S) m% g2 M+ m) J( x8 g為什麼如此難以表白?

( e- J5 A9 d8 ZI want to confess that I love you,
6 \2 q5 ^, X$ |) J% @  C5 IBut I never did

: H+ [9 G9 ?! Y$ U* d2 ^愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

' Z6 V1 |  E! j  N% H也許有一天
" X. V2 _6 p. e你將從我指間滑漏

6 Y3 S. N& Y# ]* MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
+ D' o( E( `) f; f" P5 {( _讓我向你表白
3 T  O3 P  q6 K1 g我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
! ~* L' {& w, g托付我的愛
7 {/ V2 Y0 U$ u1 |2 C, u4 ]收在你心裡
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* ?9 Q5 `3 }0 A/ ]7 N1 Y% kCan I entrust it to you?
" P  O1 t/ I' y. a9 l* aEntrust my love within your heart
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7 G: o3 ~$ e% C  v3 N8 C" i可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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, I# C9 c: t- ?6 A对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
* c3 u8 w- Z/ _, lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# N# n5 r7 X2 B/ z$ c) W7 f, z& i) x8 U# WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
( \7 }4 z+ W* i凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 j# v) p+ T6 e$ KSeeing the sky content with its love

. ?8 v; x8 q5 V# q/ a3 l: @6 c月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
: N$ X) d. g3 L1 e月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
6 E* l, o5 B' c# P9 o! u0 B害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
4 E, X: ]* k8 Z+ S9 `4 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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0 d/ J4 n( p4 C/ h你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
  y4 A& E2 Q1 E5 }# Z* d, m愛你
4 C1 I! r5 G" _5 ~% P& c. a0 g堅定不渝
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4 N, V: f( {' D& g8 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

5 H3 M7 I3 i- h/ X  M. o你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

$ t( \: N( Q. ?% q我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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7 K6 ?$ @; J' I8 k3 H. E- P" xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

7 p- c2 b& T9 b6 e0 y6 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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4 W$ t5 Q+ L: G, R2 A9 D4 [I want so much to see inside your heart

2 V* @$ ~# q: f" o) \8 V: r我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
( b; f. b6 g7 ]0 oTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
4 Q* D% x0 [. T5 x) v我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
4 F5 V2 H6 s% F0 _1 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 Y& Z% N$ S* o# t: }% f# J# l
$ Q5 `: g7 u/ N$ Z我依然滿心憂鬱
# @/ w, L2 x. p# V$ g4 [3 V你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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8 v( U5 e4 c$ A0 K' V' ]! cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
( _1 N# i! j# }' l' H- x( d我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
7 B; W7 n) ]' B# A) Y6 iYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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$ q) y/ i7 D0 i/ f$ W, X0 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 L# v4 O0 ^3 y如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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3 S! N0 W" q, j& fRambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
1 f- m7 ~$ S* L6 l1 v6 p7 n愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒